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I have the power! Chap.6 Greater power!
 Yes this is late, but hey it's here anyway.
 Haci: Gotta have a lame excuse with no concept of time to confuse the readers, right babe?
 Enough out of you!
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    Instead of being scared or shocked though the Gepo was actually sporting a wild tusky smile getting up and walking towards the newly powered up Exade with an out stretched hand, " Glady, show me your power,"!
  With that the Gepo warrior shot out numerous lasers at Haci who simply formed a shield around himself not with his Nth metal but with the very energies he had stored in himself causing the attacks to bounce off and land elsewhere creating massive explosions everywhere one of which vaporized a entire mountain range!
    Suddenly sensing something behind him the anti-hero teleported away from a point black laser aimed at his head from the back, " Fool me once shame on you," Exade laughed as he reappeared right next to Yafe, " Fool me twice,-".
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Economics done right!
    
    Hey my Fateful friends I just wanted to share this piece of financial advice you all, because in a world that's dominated by paper currency this knowledge is priceless!
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Nerds turned badass!: Part 2
 

 Fateful: Okay here's the second part, and if you're here ya obviously read the first!
 Aladdin: Let the action re-commence!
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    Spidy prepared to dodge the blow except something strange happened, he couldn't move as quick like before allowing for the assassin to score a hit right across the hero's chest plate, opening up a small gash in the suit!
    " Woah, that was too close, almost became Spider-half-man there, " Peter quipped as he tried shooting a web in an attempt to evade Travis's onslaught, only for the otaku to grab it out of the air, " Denied,"!
    Roughly pulling the Spider in the badass Otaku elbowed him in the face hard enough to dent the metal mask, not stopping in the attack he then grabbed hold of Peter's knee and neck preforming a brutal seat belt toss, then punt kicked him away into a near-by hotdog stand, " Now you're with the
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Nerds turned badass!:The brawl! Pt.1

 Fateful: The blades are out!
 Red hood: And webs are spun!
 Aladdin: So there's really only one thing to say now....
 All: LET'S END THIS 2nd SEASON IN STYLLLLLE!
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    ' Riiiing riiiing riiinng'!    'Riiing Riiiinnnnng'!
    
    A phone rang out in a somewhat clustered motel room full of wrestling tapes, tons of anime merchandise, and swordsmanship videos. It wasn't long before the rudely awakened man in the apartment's only bed awakened with great annoyance.
    " Gaaahhhh, what the fuck, who calls this early in the morning," groaned the receiver of the upcoming call, rubbing his eyes and dragging himself out of bed to pick up his phone while his cat climbed up to cuddle his face.
    " Good morning Travis, I hope you slept well, you have a busy day ahead of you," spoke a sultry female voice Travis kn
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I have the power! Chap.5 Enjoy your power!
 
 Wow what do ya know I'm writing this next chapter this early!
 Haci: Yep look at you actually showing competence for once!
 Ignoring that comment let's get this story underway!
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    " Okay let's test the current scope of my powers," Haci thought excitedly as he jumped to a large deserted island somewhere in the Atlantic.
    
After waking up, eating a healthy breakfast, and using his Wayne tech laptop to find a great training ground to test the current limits of his new powers Haci was elated to test them out, both the suits current capabilities after that explosion from the shipping warehouse, the run in with that elephant thing, and this new Match energy. 
    Zipping up his survivor jumpsuit Haci got to it!
    
    Deciding to test out his skills without any amour enhancements Haci ran up to a giant palm tree climbing it in a
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Nerds turned badass!: Part 1. Prelude

    Note from author: Before anything else we are now on our 3rd and last brawl in our trilogy ender of Season 2!
 Fateful: Nerds, those guys that in most media get pushed around by the more popular members of the school and talked down on constantly for not meeting their peers viewpoints on society.
 Red hood: And that makes it all the more exciting when they raise above all that and add badassery to their already impressive list of achievements!
 Aladdin: Like Spider-man the poster boy of Marvel!
 Fateful: And Travis Touchdown the uncrowned king!
 Red hood: And we are here to test their abilities in a Fatefulbrawl!    
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    ( Both Spider-man and Travis appear in the mansion)
    Spider-man: Odd, I usually don't get teleported to different universes this time of year.
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> Bigi: Woah this place is great for training! Glad me and Rang found it before someone else did, now to clear that other tree over there.



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Heroes of legend!: The brawl Pt.3

 Fateful: I trust my readers have seen the first 2 parts of this brawl series so we won't recap anything, but we'll say this.
 Aladdin: Also this may or may not be the last part to this brawl, if it is the last one then we'll put the words: last round, in the brawl before the final confrontation, so without further aduo let's resume!
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    It appears Link's prediction was accurate as a giant armored kraken rivaling him in size raised from the seas depths entangling the hero's weapons in it's many arms while pushing him down into the sea hoping to drown the Elven knight, and if Link actually needed to breath then that would indeed be a problem.
    To bad for the creature Link didn't have such a weakness so he fought for control with him, all the while Gil peppered the Hyrulian with high heat lasers scorching the young man in the most visible parts of his body; mostly the face, while the Kraken
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Chrysos the half-angel!

His theme: 
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Heroes of legend!: The brawl Pt.2

  Red hood: If you read part 1 then we have no need for a recap, I trust our readers have better memory then that!
 Fateful: So without further ado, let's ride! ( Oh and here's part three: 
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    After getting over his feelings of euphoria Gilgamesh pulled out another treasure from the Gates this time a sword that matched his previous spears in power sending it rocketing towards the mountain Link as traveling down but the Hyrulian saw it coming so he simply sped up his bike faster launching off the final cliff before...
BOOOOOM!
    The explosion totaled the mountain top entirely but missed the Elvan knight by a mile as he successfully cleared the blast with little difficulty his spring suspicion motorbike landed safely on the ground just half a mile from Gilgamesh's own, said King of heroes was actually glad
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Yuichiro Hyakuya brawls as the Seraph!


Gender:    Male
Age:    8 (Catastrophe, Vampire Reign Chapter 1)
12:     (Michaela, Vampire Reign Chapter 1)
16:     (Chapter 2)
Height:    170 cm (5'7")
Weight:    59 kg (130 lbs)
Favorite food: Curry
Birthday:    October 16, 2004
Blood type:    A
Favorite color:    Blue
Theme: 
    Feats: Survived being apart of the Seraph project that could destroy the world
> Is now only 9/10ths human because of it
Escaped his parents trying to kill him as a 8 year old
Escaped a human farm as a 12 year old run by the vampires with his families help
Survived the slaughter of his family at the hands of Ferid at the age of 12
> Even manages to catch the vampire noble off guard and shot him point blank with a pistol in the head: http://owarinoseraph.wikia.com/wiki/File:Yu_shoots_Ferid.png
At age 16 became one of the top 5 cadets in the Japan
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Heroes of Legend!: The Brawl! Part 1
        
 Red hood: The Gates on Babylon have been opened!
 Aladdin: And the Master sword has been polished and sharpened!
 Fateful: Looks like both heroes are ready........... ( Here's parts 2 and 3 here:https://fatefulbrawl.deviantart.com/art/Heroes-of-legend-The-brawl-Pt-2-736872974 and )
 All: FOR A FATEFUL BRAWL!!!!!!!!!!
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    " This world is very unlike any I've ever been to before, everywhere I look it's one mythical race after the other, seems they also have access to certain types of magic, this requires further investigation," Thought a well build man blond haired man soaking in a hot spring.
   
The world he was referring to was one of fantasy mere humans may see in a fairy tail book, for him however it was yet another world he was to gather " his " riches from, after all treasures in exis
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I have the power! Chap.4 Infiltration!
 
    Okay, this took a while to make but now we'll continue Haci's story!
  Haci: Dude you really have to stop taking months at a time to write my story.
  Alright I get it let's just start already!
 Haci: About time! Check here for the first chapters:https://fatefulbrawl.deviantart.com/art/I-have-the-power-Chap-1-A-dream-come-true-695857236
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" OFG "!     Exclaimed A league of Assassins guard as he fell down after being knocked out by one of Green arrow's boxing glove arrows, " Annnnnnd....... got it,"!
    Oliver Queen turned around with his phone out and with the volume down pressed a button for his new ringtone, " OFG"! 

    " Pretty cool right, I have a whole gallery here a-," Oliver is promptly whacked over the head by Canary.
    " Arrow, we're here to work not take audios of your weapon sound effects," Diana scolded.
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CLETUS: IT’S TIME FOR A DEATH BATTLE!
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   It was a peaceful day in the woods, the sun shined, the woodland critters were all calm and unharmed, and a large man was collecting large firewood. The large man was known as John Matrix, a former green beret, now retired and living in a cabin in the woods with his daughter.
   His life had been mostly peaceful since his retirement, as he was prepared to spend the rest of his days in peace. But unbeknownst to him, a helicopter was on its way to Matrix’s location. John arrived to his house with the firewood and was greeted by his daughter. But before they could use the wood, the
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 Yes this is late, but hey it's here anyway.

 Haci: Gotta have a lame excuse with no concept of time to confuse the readers, right babe?

 Enough out of you!
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    Instead of being scared or shocked though the Gepo was actually sporting a wild tusky smile getting up and walking towards the newly powered up Exade with an out stretched hand, " Glady, show me your power,"!

  With that the Gepo warrior shot out numerous lasers at Haci who simply formed a shield around himself not with his Nth metal but with the very energies he had stored in himself causing the attacks to bounce off and land elsewhere creating massive explosions everywhere one of which vaporized a entire mountain range!

    Suddenly sensing something behind him the anti-hero teleported away from a point black laser aimed at his head from the back, " Fool me once shame on you," Exade laughed as he reappeared right next to Yafe, " Fool me twice,-".

    Right as Yafe swung to hit him the giant felt a massive blow to the bottom of his spine," I snap your spine in two,"!

    With just a simple heel kick the jumper had sent Yafe soaring through a good couple miles into the sky, flying after him Exade caught up to the giant in less then a few seconds but instead decided to punch him even high and higher still, it wasn't long before the two were far above the Earth looking down upon it along with the satellites in space! 

    Coming in for another blow the anti-hero found his punch blocked by Yafe' forearm, then grabbed by his other hand to be pulled into a hard knee that due to it's size hit his while front body, then the Gepo flipped over to kick down the vigilante who caught the attack and flipped the Gepo over into an uppercut!

    Both stood back away from the other for about a second as they smiled viciously before going ham in a flurry of martial arts expertise Dbz style!   Punches were dodged or blocked, kicks were deflected, and grapples were countered accordingly.  The two created giant shockwaves from their clash, which was odd because sound shouldn't happen in space, putting off that thought Exade just focused on the current situation.

    Good thing too because Yafe had formed a giant laser spear out of his Match energy  which he attempted to impale the jumper on had Exade not dodged at the last second forming a pair of gauntlets on his arms with his Nth metal which he infused with his own energy mix to catch the spear in his hands!

    Just as he did though it shrunk into a whip that latched around his neck, a wild smirk form of Yafe's face as he snapped it back to punch the traveler who blocked with a Nth metal shield, but the Gepo persisted as hammered away at the defense until he ended up stabbing himself on the newly formed spikes around the shield!

    Ignoring the pain Yafe then flung Exade away towards Earth firing multiple needle like lasers at him, only for the shiled to block them all.

    Catching himself in mid-air the jumper decided to try out something, he stood out with his legs apart and cupped his hands, now he couldn't talk because sound couldn't travel in space, but he could think the words, " KA....ME.....HA...ME.......- ( The traveler then teleported right above the Gepo)

    HA,"!     The giant mix of Nuclear and quantum energy shot out right at Yafe who was actually able to not only look back at the young man but also smile coly as he to disappeared from sight as the attack neared Earth at a very rapid rate!

    Alarmed at his foe's speed Ezade looked all over for the Gepo until something else happened, " Very good child, but play time's over,".

    Exade was dead silent, " Wait your a telepath, how!?

     He received a mental chuckle in response, "You'll learn in time boy for now I believe it's time we get serious,".

   
Them Yafe appeared directly under the jumper grabbing him in a huge bear hug that was actually hurting the traveler, even weirder was that his body heat was rising at a ridiculous rate as it scorched the young man's Nth metal armor almost melting through it, but through it all the jumper smiled.

    " It appears I have a lot to learn about this new energy type, good thing you already showed me a neat trick," with that the said Swade called back the attack which was about to land on a small farm in Kansas, greatly shocking it's residents, and angering their adopted son who had come for a visit that day.....

    The blast having lost no momentum soon slammed into Yafe's back, it didn't stop there as it also began to sink through him incinerating every atom in it's way, in agony the Gepo let go of a shocked Exade who not wanting to seriously injure the giant reached out to stop the attack, and to his surprise it just vanished!

    " Woah, I really do have a lot to learn about Match energy..... oh wait Yafe!," 

    Reaching the Gepo he soon found out most of his entire backside was gone, not burned off, just flat out non-existent!

    " Oh no..... l-le-...let me help you, what should I do," Exade yammered frantically!

    Yafe just smirked wearily, " Don't....worry....kid.......I'll heal......you're pretty good, be seeing ya around,". And like that Yafe just vanished again likely going back home to recuperate.

    (Stop music)

    With the battle over Sade just flew back to Earth contemplating on the events of the last few minutes, " Wow.... that was insanely cool! More still I have even more to discover about not just myself but the powers I wield, nothing could ruin this moment,"!

    Just as Swade was about to teleport back to his RV someone did just that, " Hey you, let's talk abit,".

    The jumper turned around to see a very familiar red caped hero just a few feet above him, and worse yet he was not in the least bit happy.

    Exade laughed nervously, " Hey Superman,".
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    And that should do it for now.

    Haci: What you leave me in a bad situation with Superman and that's it!

    Hey anymore and the chapter loses it's main focus which was the battle, so later!

    Haci: Hey wait I'm not done with you!
The title is the name of my first webcomic that is still being written!

So at advice on how to make it better, I have two pages up right now;)

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Okay here's page 2 of the comic, sorry it took me so long, also the story is still developing so give it time, world-building is a delicate process;)

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I'm a up and coming young artist who is looking to make a name for himself while experiencing and learning from others! “Intelligence work has one moral law—it is justified by results.” -John Le Carre, The Spy Who Came In From The Cold. ( 10)

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DRAWING ANATOMY Aid:www.furaffinity.net/view/10517…

When writing, it helps hugely to begin with the end in mind. You've got the characters and situation in mind -- how does it conclude? Ok, now how do they get there? Now you've got the plot.
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What are the Beats -- the major events/turning points in the story? Sketch those (rough) and lay them out. Does the story still make sense? Time for in-betweens -- how do the peeps move/act from beat to beat? More roughs.
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Example. Lifeguard at the beach - swimmers - victim. Lifeguard saves the day.
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Beats: Beach overview (intro/setup). Establish lifeguard. Introduce swimmer. Big wave. Crowd response. Lifeguard acts! Drama in water. All flop on beach. Finale.

And you've got something with the beginning, middle, and end. Stuff and add diversions/accents to your heart's content. Your collection of roughs and betweens will lay out your story, so all you have to do is decorate them.
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Enjoy!-atomicsnarl.deviantart.com/


I figured when I saw: "That's what I've gathered from personal experience and talking to other authors."

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I also just want to add something to this:
"When writing, it helps hugely to begin with the end in mind. You've got the characters and situation in mind -- how does it conclude? Ok, now how do they get there? Now you've got the plot."

While I do agree, I also disagree.
As an author myself, I've seen, more often than not, that while having an end idea in view is a good idea, it's never best to lock in that ONE idea.
As I've stated before: let your characters surprise you. Let them grow. Real people are always changing, so, to make your characters real, let them grow as well. The end may not be the same as you planned.
By not forcing them to end exactly the way you have already planned, you have given them the ability to become 'real' people.

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You want my advice though mate? Write what you want to see written. That's what I've gathered from personal experience and talking to other authors. Think of your favorite book, if there were any qualities you felt that book was missing, write something with those qualities. And definitely do not write something just because people will be interested in it, if the story is not from your own heart and soul, it won't be any good. Never write because people will read it, write because you want it to be read. "In Heaven, there's a library, and one of the aisles in that library, is dedicated to all the books never written, don't let your story be in that aisle."-Ryan P. Freeman. Writing is something special, you have the power to create, everything you write is your world, you make the rules, the physics, the chemistry, everything is yours. That's what differs us writers from the artists on DA, while they create one picture that shows a snapshot of an incomplete world, we complete our worlds, flesh out the details, the readers see it all. Write the world you want to exist, it's your's to create. So, write what you want to see written. That's the best advice I can give you mate. Good luck!- themoldysausage.deviantart.com…

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( Also if you cannot find some of my works look in the journal section as deviantart loves to troll me with this making some of my literature into journals prank, well joke's on it here's a sample of what's there Childhood innocense vs adult lust:prelude!!  

     Aladdin: Why are we doing another prelude when the one we are doing currently is not exactly done yet we only have the first few parts.
   Fateful: Because that one will take a long while to finish do to all the creatures the TF2 crew have to deal with in the wastelands, but also because this Brawl gets my interest as of now.
  Red hood: Anyway what happens when children get ready to explore the sexuality of the adult world in a more violent way, and no I'm not talking about BDSM or masochistic pleasures.
  Aladdin: But let's see what happens when a robot child  gets the " quality time" with a female witch who is a good bit rowdy?
  Fateful: Well let's get this prelude started beam'em in! Also Thanks to https://darkartsfart.deviantart.com/ and https://yellowflash1234.deviantart.com/ for the bios!
    ( Megaman and Bayonetta get beamed into the mansion)
 
and What is life to you? Find your purpose!   
Hey it's ladger back with another introspective/philosophical piece if you want to check out my other look here:
 anyway I just wanted to talk about this for a while now, but got caught up in other things namely drawing and martial arts but reading this from a retiring vs debater/artist:
really got me thinking about some parts of life we take to lightly, to heavily, ignore, give control to others, etc. And before I go yes I understand not all things, people, experiences, or anything for that matter are equal.  It all really just depends on who your talking to, what they believe, their culture, living environment, etc there are really to many ways to ponder in this subject so I'll get you all started smoothly!
Before I go on it seems fair too say no one can ever truly tell you about life's great wonders nothing can prepare you for it and the best way to do it is to just
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sure~ this may not be what you expect to hear, but dont show your drawings to just anyone. alot of people are really discouraging and will make you only see flaws in the work you were just so proud of before showing them. Be proud for yourself and don't let others' opinions get to you. you'll start doubting yourself and the quality of your work will decrease. trust me, once you do that, your drawings will get better so much faster. Also, draw for yourself and for fun and not to impress others. When you enjoy what you're doing, it shows up in your art ///// : / yeah and I'm definitely speaking from experience. once I stopped showing negative people, I wasn't as hard on myself when I made a mistake, i was always motivated to draw, and I was in a good mood when i practiced. And I say it's always good to work on anatomy, but even with that, don't be too tough on yourself. If you look closely at the professional manga and anime artists, like if you look behind all the fancy color and extra detail, you see that they have a lot of obvious anatomical mistakes, like, a lot. So as long as you are confident and feel positive about what you were able to do, people wont look at your art for accuracy, but for the the amount of creativity you put in it instead-angelheights.deviantart.com/



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Pursued being a scientist, wrote novels, tried making a comic and made art (supposedly to illustrate those novels).
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Being a scientist is slow/mundane work. It's not like being Tony Stark or Rick from Rick and Morty - or the things that attracted me to it. And it takes a lot of time to be any good at it, as much as it takes to be a decent illustrator. It makes sense, but some part of me was expecting something different. (And I realized that I do not feel like the work sparkles, it's cool yeah, but it doesn't sparkle), so I quit at my third year of Ph.D. studies. 
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Which Naruto Character Are You?
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The most frustrating thing I encounter on deviant art isn't disagreement, crazy beliefs, trolls, etc. It's people who don't understand the point being made (no matter how clear I try to be), and then respond to some phantom argument I never made, or position I don't hold. People occasionally ask for clarification, which I'm happy to provide, but more often, they just go into full outrage mode. Let's Get Started! Class 1Class is in session. So you're either new to drawing, or you've been drawing for a while and you're having trouble. :iconcrydesuplz: Maybe it's the anatomy, maybe it's the pose. Well we're here to help. :iconyeashplz:
Follow along and take notes. Don't forget to sketch along with the videos.
How to improve fast:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wWuaQ84kGwI
Now for some anatomy:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JeluYdgfltY
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1-Ua_Q-Nqg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OzIE03WK2ew
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OecdZS-61n8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qjHmHFZ651Y
Homework: :iconwhatwhereplz:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XOreDmvrb88
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iaraoL1rstM&t=1024s
Post a link to your homework (If you decide to do it) in the comment section along with any questions. We're here to help :iconairpunchplz:
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I am not my eye colour.
I am not my hair colour.
I am not my skin colour.
I am not my genitalia.
I am not my sexuality.
I am not my ancestors. 
I am not my friends.
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I am not other people.
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Don't give up or give in. You're not the only one to face these things and never will be. We all faced simmer things and survived through it. Don't bring more harm to yourself by treating your skin as paper and cutting it or trying to kill yourself. Life gets better and it's not just a saying. It's said because it's true. That those who say it has experienced problems or pain. Life doesn't remain one way forever. Sure bad things may have happened for years and years, but look at your age now and compare it to how long you can live...
Do you really think those terrible things will follow you forever? That life will stay it's bleak shape forever? Tell me...

Do you really know? Or...are you guessing? 

Life will be hard. No doubt about it. And yes, it will continue to get harder from here. But it won't be hard  where it can't be
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RSeer Featured By Owner 5 hours ago
Thanks very much for the Bergman fav! Visit anytime. :-)
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Will do!
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RSeer Featured By Owner 1 hour ago
Great! Also, thanks very much for watching. Enjoy! :-)
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Thank you for the watch and fave.
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Thanks you for the art!

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Sculla Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
And I have to decline on that please.
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Why?
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Hi
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Fatefulbrawl Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Yo, what's up?
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Who is your favorite Fairy Tail character?
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